Friday, August 29, 2014

Blog #4: Summer Reading Prompted Writing

"This was a dirty job, as we had to dismantle the tin chimney to move the stove back and forth, and we were both rained down in black soot; but when we were finished I could not imagine a soul would ever find our treasure, for no one would think to look in so remote a spot.The rough estimate of these riches was set at fifteen thousand dollars; my take of this more than tripled my savings, and as we left the musty basement, heading up the stairs and into the light, I felt two things at once: A gladness at this turn of fortune, but also an emptiness that I did not feel more glad; or rather, a fear that my gladness was forced or false. I thought, Perhaps a man is never meant to be truly happy. Perhaps there is no such a thing in our world, after all. As we walked the halls of the hotel the whores were abuzz with the news of Mayfield's head-wounded departure, and the disappearance of the trappers. I spied Charlie's whore, looking only slightly less green than before, and took her to the side, asking where the bookkeeper was. "They ran her up to the doc's."  'Is she all right?'  'I imagine. They're always running her up there' I pressed a hundred dollars into her hand. 'I want you to give this to her when she comes back.' She stared at the money. 'Jesus Christ on a cloud.' 'I will return in two weeks' time. If I find she has not received it, there will be a price to pay, do you understand me?' 'Mister, I was just standing in the hall, here.' I held up a double eagle. 'This is for you.' She dropped the coin into her pocket. Peering down the hall in the direction Charlie had gone she asked, 'I don't suppose your brother'll be leaving me a hundred.' 'No I don't suppose he will.' 'You got all the romantic blood, is that it?' 'Our blood is the same, we just use it differently.' I turned and walked away. A half-dozen steps, and she asked. 'You want to tell me what she did for this?' I stopped and thought. I told her, 'She was pretty, and kind to me.' And the poor whore's face, she just did not know what to think about that. She went back into her room, slammed the door shut, and shrieked two times."  
             In the book The Sister’s Bothers by Patrick Dewitt, the passage that acts as a turning point in the midpoint of the book emphasizes the theme “Darkness vs. Light”. In the quote “Our blood is the same, we just use it differently.” sets an atmosphere of contrast between the two main characters, Eli and Charlie. The passage around the quote helps the reader understand Eli as a real person who sends a sense of intimidation while showing compassion towards people he cares for. This is however expected from Eli because throughout the book he is kind and caring by nature. On the other hand, Charlie acts in an opposite manner which supports the main theme and quote of how they are so close yet completely different. By reading this passage, the reader is sent a clear message that Eli has already chosen a different path than his older brother. This lets the reader comprehend that experience is a small catalyst that has led Eli and Charlie to have beliefs on opposite ends of the spectrum. However, through this difference they share a bond that is hidden in the diction the writer sets in their dialog.


In the book, Eli who plays as a protagonist shows care and kindness towards everyone. This is first shown when Eli talked about feeling bad when he had to use the whip on his horse when he was left no choice. When Eli and Charlie end up going to a clothing store in the middle of the night, Eli tells Charlie that he wants to settle down and have an honest living. This intrigues Charlie, but he dismisses it quickly. When Eli met the lady at the front desk – of the first hotel the brothers stayed at- Eli liked her for how she behaved and was very considerate when she was aggressive at the beginning. Feeling bad for her living environment Eli tips her generously; leaving the money under the bed, so his brother wouldn't see it. Having realized Eli is a big softy Charlie places an ultimatum on Eli to either leave or to finish the job and do whatever he wants to do after.




In addition, Charlie (Eli’s brother) is a protagonist as well however, he shows aggression, bad habits, and vulgarity throughout this book. When the brothers come across a boy surrounded by wagons who aimed a gun at them asking questions, Charlie doesn't hesitate when he grabs the rifle and thwarts the kid on the head. There was no remorse from Charlie when he knocked the kid out with one sweep. This showed the aggressive side of Charlie by letting the reader know that he is not patient. Charlie displays his vulgarity when he is laughing and dancing around (clearly enjoying himself) with the whores at Mayfield’s office while Eli goes out to talk to the lady who is the bookkeeper. Also, throughout the book Charlie get drunk frequently even though his body takes the toll the next day, yet he insists. This exhibits his bad habits reinforcing his character as an unlikable person.      

Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Blog #4: Extending Our Roots

"This was a dirty job, as we had to dismantle the tin chimney to move the stove back and forth, and we were both rained down in black soot; but when we were finished I could not imagine a soul would ever find our treasure, for no one would think to look in so remote a spot.The rough estimate of these riches was set at fifteen thousand dollars; my take of this more than tripled my savings, and as we left the musty basement, heading up the stairs and into the light, I felt two things at once: A gladness at this turn of fortune, but also an emptiness that I did not feel more glad; or rather, a fear that my gladness was forced or false. I thought, Perhaps a man is never meant to be truly happy. Perhaps there is no such a thing in our world, after all. As we walked the halls of the hotel the whores were abuzz with the news of Mayfield's head-wounded departure, and the disappearance of the trappers. I spied Charlie's whore, looking only slightly less green than before, and took her to the side, asking where the bookkeeper was. "They ran her up to the doc's."  'Is she all right?'  'I imagine. They're always running her up there' I pressed a hundred dollars into her hand. 'I want you to give this to her when she comes back.' She stared at the money. 'Jesus Christ on a cloud.' 'I will return in two weeks' time. If I find she has not received it, there will be a price to pay, do you understand me?' 'Mister, I was just standing in the hall, here.' I held up a double eagle. 'This is for you.' She dropped the coin into her pocket. Peering down the hall in the direction Charlie had gone she asked, 'I don't suppose your brother'll be leaving me a hundred.' 'No I don't suppose he will.' 'You got all the romantic blood, is that it?' 'Our blood is the same, we just use it differently.' I turned and walked away. A half-dozen steps, and she asked. 'You want to tell me what she did for this?' I stopped and thought. I told her, 'She was pretty, and kind to me.' And the poor whore's face, she just did not know what to think about that. She went back into her room, slammed the door shut, and shrieked two times."  

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Blog #4: Pre - Black Walnut Tree

Black Walnut Reading (Sermon)


Determine the impression you'd like to convey, based on your interpretation of the poem itself.  For example, one year, students read a poem titled "Thou Blind Man's Mark," a sixteenth century sonnet in which the speaker was an angry, bitter man confronting "Desire" as an adversary or foe.  Someone he could not escape. So, one group decided a Country-Western theme would be appropriate, and instead of reciting the poem, sang it.
WHAT IMPRESSION WOULD YOU LIKE TO CONVEY? WHY? WRITE ONE CHUNKY PARAGRAPH JUSTIFYING THIS, USING LINES FROM THE TEXT.


During the reading, we are trying to produce a passionate version of the poem based on a church sermon. This will include many hallelujahs and a boisterous speaker. The tone of the poem is solemn and the main purpose of the of the sermon is to convince the readers that the content of the poem is worthwhile to listen to. We want to convey a sense of security when the speaker delivers the service yet urge them to feel some sort of remorse for the speaker as he tells this tragic story. When the speaker delivers the sermon, he will go from a near whisper to a powerful holler. Varying dynamics will keep the audience engaged and interested in the poem.


2.  Determine what props and costuming would be helpful in performing their poems and what kind of lighting you would like. Scenery must be minimal, but the use of the performance space will be discussed.
WHICH PROPS AND COSTUMING WILL BE USED? WHAT KIND OF LIGHTING WOULD YOU USE? WHY? WRITE ONE CHUNKY PARAGRAPH JUSTIFYING THIS, USING LINES FROM THE TEXT.


The preacher wears  a black and white suit to show the audience that he is an important figure in the play. The other character playing as local towns-people will wear casual clothing to represent audience of the sermon. The preacher will use a podium to make the scene easier to understand for the audience. The lighting will be atop of the preacher to signify his importance and let the audience pay attention to him. There will  be a dim light on the rest of the characters to give them some importance which occurs only when they have dialog. The preacher will face the other characters as he gives his sermon.




3. Decide how to order the poems. Are there any patterns or themes that you want to utilize in putting the material together? How do you want to arrange the actors? Will they all be on stage at the same time, or enter separately? In the example from #1, the group decided that, because country songs have refrains, they would need to repeat significant words and phrases to create a refrain.
WILL YOU DRAW ATTENTION TO CERTAIN PHRASES OR WORDS? WHY ARE THESE WORDS (OR WORD) IMPORTANT? WHY DOES THE REPETITION OF THIS WORD/THESE WORDS REINFORCE THE MEANING OF THE POEM AS A WHOLE. WRITE ONE CHUNKY PARAGRAPH JUSTIFYING THIS, USING LINES FROM THE
TEXT.

We are drawing attention to the phrases smashing down, brighter than money, crawl in shame, emptiness, whipcrack. These words are essential because they are able to be visualized and stressed with a sense of importance. Tommy (the preacher) will stand behind the symposium preaching to the audience creating an official/leader-like persona. The theme is freedom because the people in the story are trying to become free of their mortgage yet they won’t sacrifice the tree in order to attain it.   

Blog #3: Black Walnut Tree (Sermon) with video

During the reading, we are trying to produce a passionate version of the poem based on a church sermon. This will include many hallelujahs and a boisterous speaker. The tone of the poem is solemn and the main purpose of the of the sermon is to convince the readers that the content of the poem is worthwhile to listen to. We want to convey a sense of security when the speaker delivers the service yet urge them to feel some sort of remorse for the speaker as he tells this tragic story. When the speaker delivers the sermon, he will go from a near whisper to a powerful holler. Varying dynamics will keep the audience engaged and interested in the poem.



The preacher wears  a black and white suit to show the audience that he is an important figure in the play. The other character playing as local towns-people will wear casual clothing to represent audience of the sermon. The preacher will use a podium to make the scene easier to understand for the audience. The lighting will be atop of the preacher to signify his importance and let the audience pay attention to him. There will  be a dim light on the rest of the characters to give them some importance which occurs only when they have dialog. The preacher will face the other characters as he gives his sermon.


We are drawing attention to the phrases smashing down, brighter than money, crawl in shame, emptiness, whipcrack. These words are essential because they are able to be visualized and stressed with a sense of importance. Tommy (the preacher) will stand behind the symposium preaching to the audience creating an official/leader-like persona. The theme is freedom because the people in the story are trying to become free of their mortgage yet they won’t sacrifice the tree in order to attain it.   


Thursday, August 21, 2014

Blog #2: Roots Summer Reading

Monday, August 18, 2014

Blog #1: Design Justification

I chose the simple but also an eye catcher to those who are new to the website theme. The light blue to the white fade calms the reader and helps them enjoy the experience. The rain droplets add purity which leaves an imprint in the reader's mind. The mountain in the background helps the reader think of nature which would be the color green. This stimulates the reader's senses leading to a faster reading and comprehension rate. To focus more on elegance for the webpage I have left the font in "Times New Roman". Some of the text is in the color orange which also create a happy and somewhat energetic setting. My goal was to make this webpage an easy browse which is now possible with the simplistic color combinations added.

Sources:  http://psychology.about.com/od/sensationandperception/a/color_green.htm
http://psychology.about.com/od/sensationandperception/a/color_blue.htm 
http://tympanus.net/codrops/2012/02/19/establish-a-mood-with-typography/